Narrative Nonfiction with Julie Leung

We are so excited to have Julie Leung join us today to share information about narrative nonfiction picture books!


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By day, Julie Leung is a marketing director at Random House, specializing in sci-fi/fantasy. By night, she is a children’s book author. Her debut series, Mice of the Round Table was praised as a “winning new adventure,” by Kirkus Reviews. She is also the author of Paper Son: The Story of Tyrus Wong, The Fearless Flights of Hazel Ying Lee, and more.


I first read about Tyrus Wong through his New York Times obituary. It was December 2016, and I was reckoning with the anti-immigrant policies that came with the new presidential administration. I was also looking for my next writing project after completing my middle grade series, Mice of the Round Table. 

It was the perfect time to encounter this incredible life story of a man who lived to be 106 years old -- a visual artist who made groundbreaking contributions to American animation and art, particularly through his work on the Disney classic, Bambi. He was also a man who, according to the laws of the time, immigrated to the United States illegally as a paper son. 

During the many decades that the Chinese Exclusion Act was in place, a few exceptions were made: if one were a person of high status (such as a merchant or scholar) or related to a Chinese person already living in the country. These exceptions kicked off a black market of false identification papers sold in China, where desperate immigrants would often claim blood relations to Chinese who were already in America, i.e. becoming a son or daughter to someone ‘on paper’ only. 

Tyrus and his father, bearing papers claiming to be of merchant class, arrived in San Francisco in 1919. When they were stopped at Angel Island Immigration Station, 10-year-old Tyrus was separated from his father and detained for over a month. When you watch video interviews where Tyrus recounts that experience, you can see how that trauma still haunts him. 

I wanted more people to know about Tyrus Wong’s legacy and this little-taught history around the Chinese Exclusion Act and the ‘paper son’ phenomenon. I wanted to convey how immigrants, wanted or not, make huge contributions to this country. How could I encapsulate all this in a nonfiction picture book? 


Step 1: I drafted an initial outline of the manuscript based on the obituary alone, establishing the key beats in Tyrus’s life I thought would be important. 

Step 2: I began my research in earnest. I read as many articles as I could find and watched numerous interviews with Tyrus on YouTube. My agent helped me source this fantastic documentary called Tyrus directed by Pamela Tom. I also found a retrospective art book published by the Walt Disney Foundation. Both proved to be instrumental. 

Step 3: After I fleshed out the manuscript with these researched details, I began to look for places to infuse poetic impact. From the beginning, I always knew I wanted to end the book with old man Tyrus flying his kite, facing the same ocean he crossed as a child. But other moments came to the forefront at this research stage -- when I read about how Tyrus would work as a janitor at his art school, I added a moment where he imagines that his mop is a paint brush. 

The motif of paper surfaced insistently: paper as Tyrus’ medium for his art, the newspapers his father used to teach him calligraphy, the fact that he was a paper son. I thought about my own parents who immigrated from a similar village just 40 miles away from where Tyrus’s family lived. 

Becoming an immigrant is rewriting one’s own fate—throwing out what has been written for you and determining your own story on a new page of paper. 

And thus, my refrain of “life in America could be like a blank paper” where Tyrus could leave his “mark” came to be. 

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Step 4: At this point, my agent and I felt that the manuscript was in good shape to go on submission. It eventually landed at Random House Children’s, in the capable hands of Anne Schwartz, where she helped me streamline and clarify certain concepts so that children could grasp them more easily. I also reached out to the Wong family at this time who provided additional insights and most importantly to me, their blessing on the project. 

Step 5: A final round of fact-checks and copy edits later, and my words went to the brilliant illustrator Chris Sasaki. How did he manage to take that 1,500 word manuscript and transform it into pure visual poetry? You’ll have to ask him! 


Thanks for joining us, Julie!

You can find more information about Julie and her books on both Twitter and Instagram @jleungbooks.

Narrative Nonfiction with Samantha Smith

We are so excited to have Samantha Smith join us today to share information about narrative nonfiction picture books!

Sam Smith is a freelance commercial writer and children’s book author. Her first picture book, CATE’S MAGIC GARDEN, celebrates the power of positivity. It was published by Two Hoots Press in 2017. Sam has served on the SCBWI PA WEST Leadership Team, participates in two writing critique groups, and loves the challenge of “saying it with flair.” She lives with her husband and their two sons in Fred Rogers’s neighborhood of Pittsburgh.


Telling it With Flair: The Art of Narrative Nonfiction (for Kids)
When I first started as a copywriter in the advertising world, I was told to “say it square, then say it with flair.” These words have proven tremendously helpful over the years when I’m trying to bring a phrase to life. First, I state the facts. Then, I add the flourish.

I like to think of narrative nonfiction as a similar mix of art and science—a blend that brings nonfiction stories to life. We’ve been lucky in the last ten or so years to have seen an explosion in this genre, as kid lit embraces history, science and other more technical topics from the nonfiction realm with creativity and kid-friendly language, curiosity, and focus. It’s journalism that jumps off the page. 

How Do You Make this Magic?
The secret behind narrative nonfiction is that it takes expository nonfiction one step further by telling a nonfiction story using fiction techniques, like different POVs, interesting dialogue, plot and character development, dramatic tensions, foreshadowing, and colorful language, including similes and metaphors. It’s done in a narrative fashion—first this happened, then that, then that. Also known as creative nonfiction or literary nonfiction, it is still always 100% true.

Many times this means walking in someone’s shoes, like a real character from history that moves through the story. Narrative nonfiction writers need to do double duty to pull this off, since it requires extensive research to first get the story right—and extensive creativity to tell it thoughtfully and make it more interesting. This is all done to put you in the story, dear reader. And it is a wonderful strategy that elevates the experience for all of us!

How Long are the Stories?
Typically, narrative nonfiction stories fall within the average ranges of word counts, although as you might imagine, they tend to land on the heavier side, since they’re covering a lot of ground. For pre-K through 2nd grade, narrative nonfiction picture books can weigh in between 400-900 words. As the topics get more sophisticated and the language follows, grades 3-8 may see books with 900-1,300 words.

What does Narrative Nonfiction Look Like on the Page?
Lucky for us, the world is teeming with great examples of narrative nonfiction, and here are a few noteworthy examples to tuck into:

Finding Winnie
Billed as “the true story of the world’s most famous bear,” Finding Winnie takes us to the story behind the story of Winnie-the-Pooh. This historically accurate tale was written by Lindsay Mattick and illustrated by Sophie Blackall. With illustrations echoing the soft pastels of Winnie-the-Pooh, the story unwinds much like a poetic Pooh story, “the train rolled right through dinner and over the sunset and around ten o’ clock and into a nap and out the next day….” It has a running dialogue with a young boy, who listens to his mom tell how a veterinarian from Winnipeg named Harry Colebourn rescued a bear cub “Winnie” on his way to war. 

Winnie became a navigator and the Mascot of the Second Canadian Infantry Brigade as they trained in England during WWI. When he went to the front lines, Colebourn took her to the London Zoo to keep her safe, which is where she met a boy named Christopher Robin Milne. This might be sounding more familiar now. Christopher’s father was Alan Alexander Milne, who wrote the Winnie-the-Pooh stories. And the little boy in the picture book story? The great-great-grandson of the veterinarian. A happy surprise for him! This story showcases old photos and keepsakes, too, and it’s a moving tribute to the bear and the enduring stories she inspired. It brings history alive.

Sergeant Reckless
Another war-time tale, Sergeant Reckless is “the true story of the little horse who became a hero.” This engaging and strikingly illustrated book was written by the award-winning team of author Patricia McCormick and illustrator Iacopo Bruno. Set during the Korean War, it depicts the real life acts of bravery by a starving horse that U.S. Marines took in as a packhorse. They trained “Sergeant Reckless” to transport heavy ammunition through treacherous conditions for the critical Battle of Outpost Vegas. 

This lovable horse will win your heart with her ravenous appetite and equally big will to help. For her efforts, she becomes the only animal to hold military rank and receive two Purple Hearts. Through careful characterization, plot building, foreshadowing, and a fun mix of vintage-y and comic book-inspired illustrations, her story bounds off the page. Photos of the real Sergeant Reckless bring a satisfying full circle ending to her incredible life.

There are so many more excellent examples of narrative nonfiction! Check out Eye of the Storm by Amy Cherrix, which turns science into an adventure—or Grand Canyon by Jason Chin, which makes you, the Grand Canyon, and the life inhabiting it the main characters in a trip through the Grand Canyon and through time.

The possibilities for narrative nonfiction in kid lit are endless. There are also some great recommendations for K-6 readers on this Pinterest page by Ellen Mackey.

Trying Your Hand at Narrative Nonfiction
After experiencing these books, you might be moved to write some narrative nonfiction yourself. There are two great ways to approach a new genre, and the first is writing about what lights your fire. Does the topic of endangered animals make you want to send a missive to your senator? Are you really passionate about the history of your beloved vacation town? When it comes to writing, passion can tell the most amazing stories. And if you don’t have something in mind already, the second method would be to do your homework. There are always gaps in subjects, and certainly there are spots you can fill. This wide world is waiting for its stories to be told.

So what are you waiting for? Grab some narrative nonfiction or start your own. These stories, first told square and then with flair, are elevated versions of our history, scientific tales and more. They are one layer nonfiction, one layer creativity. 100% truth. Tell yours.


Thank you for joining us, Sam!

You can find Sam www.smithofwords.com, www.catesmagicgarden.com, or on twitter at @samsmithofwords.